~Takai Otome~

[Meimi132]

I'm not sure if the name translates as it should... but what the hell, I like the name lol. I have put this on, Gaia, Drunkduck and Neomag forums. I just want alot of people to read of it and give me advice! I know it isnt great! I still have MANY years to improve. So gimme help, and hopefully I will improve ALOT lol. :p


http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v21/Meimi132/newbanner.jpg (http://www.drunkduck.com/Takai_Otome/?p=21774)

There is the link to where I host it. All 18 pages so far. Enjoy!

[Meimi132]

Yay! It worked! I was worried since the top thread I saw was about not be able to post if you just joined lol. I'm glad it worked hehe.

[Meimi132]

No one wants to read? awwwwwwwwwwww, people on gaia have...

[Aratos]

Not bad. I'm not really a fan of that sort of storyline, but the artwork's certainly pretty good. You might want to work on the plot a bit though. The dialogue's not exactly top notch, and it's kinda holding the plot back, or at least that's how it seems.

[kazuchiyo]

Two comments:

1: As it stands "Takai Otome" means roughly "Expensive Maiden/Girl." ^_^;;
You could say "Senotakai Otome" or "Senotakai Onnanoko" instead to get across the height thing.

2: Are you, yourself, a very tall girl? I am somewhat tall (5'9")and I was somewhat amused at the fact that I really identified with the character's desire to find a way to shrink herself at the beginning of the story. :)

[Meimi132]

Two comments:

1: As it stands "Takai Otome" means roughly "Expensive Maiden/Girl." ^_^;;
You could say "Senotakai Otome" or "Senotakai Onnanoko" instead to get across the height thing.

2: Are you, yourself, a very tall girl? I am somewhat tall (5'9")and I was somewhat amused at the fact that I really identified with the character's desire to find a way to shrink herself at the beginning of the story. :)


Thankies for the translation, cos I just typed in "tall" in a japanese translator and Takai was the one I liked most. I know the meaning of certain japanese words change by what context they're being used in. hehe.
I am a VERY tall girl, well considered tall lol, I am 6 foot (nearly one inch, but i would prefer just 6 foot lol) I don't have her hair, my hair is almost identical to Uo-chan's from furuba lol. But accident hehe. Although I do love Uo-chan.

[Meimi132]

bumpies su

[Samara Rivenhart]

i think its a wonderful idea so dont get discourage i would love to see you comic and love to read it so keep your hopes up i mean people thought i didnt know how to spell tokyo and the title of my manga is Tokyuo: Love Affair and no its not based on the city

[Meimi132]

i think its a wonderful idea so dont get discourage i would love to see you comic and love to read it so keep your hopes up i mean people thought i didnt know how to spell tokyo and the title of my manga is Tokyuo: Love Affair and no its not based on the city


Thankies su! Is your comic on a thread in this forum? If so I will look for it su!