What do u think...more pages

[Purtalic]

I wish to know if people would be interested in buying or reading this if i was published.

Ohkay....here is the start of mine....critisism please.Its read Japanese style

cover
http://i82.photobucket.com/albums/j247/NyndeWatkinson/Cover.jpg
Chapter insert
http://i82.photobucket.com/albums/j247/NyndeWatkinson/PTL-MBJcopy.jpg
Page 1
http://i82.photobucket.com/albums/j247/NyndeWatkinson/RePage1.jpg
Page 2
http://i82.photobucket.com/albums/j247/NyndeWatkinson/RePage2.jpg
Page3
http://i82.photobucket.com/albums/j247/NyndeWatkinson/RePage3.jpg
Page4
http://i82.photobucket.com/albums/j247/NyndeWatkinson/Page4redo.jpg
Page 5
http://i82.photobucket.com/albums/j247/NyndeWatkinson/Page5redo.jpg
Page 6
http://i82.photobucket.com/albums/j247/NyndeWatkinson/Page6redo.jpg
Page 7
http://i82.photobucket.com/albums/j247/NyndeWatkinson/Page7redo.jpg
Page 8
http://i82.photobucket.com/albums/j247/NyndeWatkinson/Page8redo.jpg
Page 9
http://i82.photobucket.com/albums/j247/NyndeWatkinson/Page9redo.jpg
hope the links work......damn crappy scanner

[SkullKihd]

:( aww i wanted to see...it doesnt work

[Purtalic]

OH NO! I must fix this......

[Purtalic]

YAY fixed

[SkullKihd]

*O* COOL! what types of stuff do you use?

[Purtalic]

i use toner(hand), liquid fine point pen, and structure paper

[SkullKihd]

whats structure paper? and where can i get it

[Purtalic]

i got mine in england......its basically a stiff paper that can be used by all art mediums

[SkullKihd]

:( i live in USA

[Purtalic]

i live in Canada......just go to an art store and ask for multipurpose A4 paper...they should know what you mean

[SkullKihd]

haha i wish....not many art stores in this small ass city...probly have to order it.... :(

[Purtalic]

damn...that sucks......i should scan more pages in.....what do u think?

[SkullKihd]

that'd be cool!...ive only got one drawing scanned and its on my myspace....

[Purtalic]

lol...mind you they are redos of the pages 4 and 5

[SkullKihd]

cool...im working on two manga that im gonna have cross over into the other when the first ends :)
but im havin trouble coming up with the plot for the second....

[Purtalic]

Lol same.....my friend and I have made novels.....im doin the comic for it and we are both doing the animation. One of the stories is the "behind the scene's type thing of two of the characters that are very popular.

[SkullKihd]

haha...how old're you? O.o

[Purtalic]

17 you?

[SkullKihd]

me's? just turned 19 in march :P

[Purtalic]

sweet....i turn 18 Dec 24

[SkullKihd]

cool....so whats canada like?

[Purtalic]

almost simular to your contry but with many different cultures and alot more fun. ^.'

[SkullKihd]

>.o more fun? hows?

[Purtalic]

Its Canada .... how else.........lol and we have the worlds largest mall. sorry for the long wait between replies....finishing last comic page before i scan

[SkullKihd]

haha...i hate crowds! so that mall would make me go... @_@ BOOM!!!

[Purtalic]

meh...go on a weekday and its nice....weekends.....i cant even move inthere.

[SkullKihd]

haha...so how long does it take to do a page for you?

[Purtalic]

lol im almost done

[SkullKihd]

haha no i mean to draw and ink a page...hehe sorry

[Purtalic]

oh...depends on how detailed it is. 30 mins to about 2 hours

[SkullKihd]

cool...ive never completed a page from lack of materials....

[Purtalic]

done...now to scan

[SkullKihd]

haha....so how do i make my own thread..i did it once but forgot... :D

[Purtalic]

ummmm.....go to the main thing and click....new thread up at the top

[Purtalic]

now to add the words.....

[Purtalic]

NOOOOO dammit...i can't find the same text i used T_T

[SkullKihd]

haha its okie!

[Purtalic]

YAY found the text im putting 4 more pages on

[SkullKihd]

hooray! ^_^

[Purtalic]

brb....need to go into town

[SkullKihd]

ok....ill check layter

[Purtalic]

Back And I Have The Pages Done

[SkullKihd]

ok cool

[Purtalic]

Page 4 http://i6.photobucket.com/albums/y223/Purtalic/Page4redo.jpg
Page 5 http://i6.photobucket.com/albums/y223/Purtalic/Page5redo.jpg
Page 6 http://i6.photobucket.com/albums/y223/Purtalic/Page6redo.jpg
Page 7 http://i6.photobucket.com/albums/y223/Purtalic/Page7redo.jpg
Page 8 http://i6.photobucket.com/albums/y223/Purtalic/Page8redo.jpg

[SkullKihd]

those are cool!
i hope i think up a storyline and get the stuff i need to start
....i need a job to...which i may have soon

[Purtalic]

i wish you the best of luck......omg they are small.

[Purtalic]

is that you in your icon.....whoever it is ..they are hot

[SkullKihd]

haha thanks...its me!

[Purtalic]

oooooo sexy.......can i see a better pic?

[SkullKihd]

http://profile.myspace.com/index.cfm?fuseaction=user.viewprofile&friendid=21338677

i think theres some in my pics....but i have no gotee anymore

[SkullKihd]

maaaaybe not....oh well...how do i put pics on these?
i think i have a new one...

[Purtalic]

ooooooo......i like long hair on guys HAHA. very nice.

[SkullKihd]

^_^ haha thanks

[Purtalic]

got to go to the city....talk to you later...add me to msn...

winter_queen_purtalic@hotmail.com or if you dont have those i have Yahoo and AIM

Bubyes

[SkullKihd]

i have AIM Najeck01

[Purtalic]

sweet...hopefully more people look at this

[Purtalic]

sigh...........

[Samara Rivenhart]

oh man i cant read it that sucks hey can you email it to me its lmccain44@hotmail.com

[black_myst]

ur dragons are good. try to work on ur ppl more. for instance, the legs look very awkward when the elf's running...

[xdeathberry]

Your study of anatomy is okay, but you could improve.
But I think you need to work on how the clothes and materials move. Even your shadowing and such.
Like, clothes have wrinkles in them. You should learn how to make those flow.
It's good, but you could do better ! :D

[Purtalic]

oh man i cant read it that sucks hey can you email it to me its lmccain44@hotmail.com
Sure thing ^_^

[Purtalic]

ur dragons are good. try to work on ur ppl more. for instance, the legs look very awkward when the elf's running...
>.< and I thought I was bad at the dragons >.<

[Purtalic]

Your study of anatomy is okay, but you could improve.
But I think you need to work on how the clothes and materials move. Even your shadowing and such.
Like, clothes have wrinkles in them. You should learn how to make those flow.
It's good, but you could do better ! :D
Thankies.....I need better pens and more time.

[SkullKihd]

just stopped bye to say hello!
dont know when ill be on again tho....

[Purtalic]

just stopped bye to say hello!
dont know when ill be on again tho....
ohkies thankyou

[Purtalic]

and it goes dead again

[Purtalic]

Omg I Stabbed My Finger!