doodlemonkey
04-05-2006, 04:13 PM
stories!! its half the manga! i wanna start a place where one can post their stories on and people would give their opinions on it!
here is one of mine.
there is a guy whose name is kenji. he wants to become the best swordmaster in the world (dont worry ill come up with a better name for it) and he has to be 15 to register. He is fifteen now and he goes to the registration place. he finds out that the needs an ID card (another name ill come up with later) and doesnt have one cause they handed them out a week ago (when he was still 14). he starts to walk home completely depressed and suddenly finds a bird with an ID card in its beak (what luck!). after he grabs it a girl named Amy comes up and says that that was her ID card. But kenji says its blank. girl says she hasnt put her name on it yet. kenju makes a run for it. after registering he gets put in a group. naturally amy is in it, and another character named joshua. Amy freaks but decides not to report him. after that they are told to defeat 3 droids to determine their rank. they are about to start fighting when 6 men from a foreign crime organization comes in to take all the crystals found in the contestants weapons (this makes the weapons nonlethal). kenji stands up to them but they cut him with a real sword. this freaks all of the kids out, but kenji rises up to the chalange and defeats all of them. after they find out that they got the worst rank since they never defeated the droids. but kenji is happy all the same since he just took his first step to becoming that best swordmaster in the world.
well thats one idea. what do you guys think?
here is one of mine.
there is a guy whose name is kenji. he wants to become the best swordmaster in the world (dont worry ill come up with a better name for it) and he has to be 15 to register. He is fifteen now and he goes to the registration place. he finds out that the needs an ID card (another name ill come up with later) and doesnt have one cause they handed them out a week ago (when he was still 14). he starts to walk home completely depressed and suddenly finds a bird with an ID card in its beak (what luck!). after he grabs it a girl named Amy comes up and says that that was her ID card. But kenji says its blank. girl says she hasnt put her name on it yet. kenju makes a run for it. after registering he gets put in a group. naturally amy is in it, and another character named joshua. Amy freaks but decides not to report him. after that they are told to defeat 3 droids to determine their rank. they are about to start fighting when 6 men from a foreign crime organization comes in to take all the crystals found in the contestants weapons (this makes the weapons nonlethal). kenji stands up to them but they cut him with a real sword. this freaks all of the kids out, but kenji rises up to the chalange and defeats all of them. after they find out that they got the worst rank since they never defeated the droids. but kenji is happy all the same since he just took his first step to becoming that best swordmaster in the world.
well thats one idea. what do you guys think?