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[Verdekurama]

My manga is about a girl named Elizabeth, her dad opens up a dog grooming shop. It takes place in San Francisco. She winds up getting a crush on a boy from a rival dog grooming, and dog day care center.

This idea is not to be used without my permission.

[kazuchiyo]

My manga is about a girl named Elizabeth, her dad opens up a dog grooming shop. It takes place in San Francisco. She winds up getting a crush on a boy from a rival dog grooming, and dog day care center.

This idea is not to be used without my permission.

You win. That's AWESOME. It has no devils/angels/half-demons in it, it's not about trying to become the best whatever in the world, and it's an idea I've NEVER heard of before, which executed correctly could be really good.
I'd LOVE to see that.

[Ashton_Anchors]

kinda reminds me of that pizza movie that they had on fox family I do believe. It was about a boy and girl and their families were rivals in the pizza biz, well they fall in love with each other and their families dissaprove of the whole thing. I think it was called Pizza My Heart or something.

[takethebackseat]

I agree wholeheartedly with linlinchan ;)


This idea is not to be used without my permission.

However I looked this up for you on the government's copyright site:

What Is Not Protected By Copyright (http://www.copyright.gov/circs/circ31.html)

Ideas, Methods, or Systems are not subject to copyright protection. Copyright protection, therefore, is not available for: ideas or procedures for doing, making, or building things; scientific or technical methods or discoveries; business operations or procedures; mathematical principles; formulas, algorithms; or any other concept, process, or method of operation.

Section 102 of the copyright law, title 17, United States Code, clearly expresses this principle: “In no case does copyright protection for an original work of authorship extend to any idea, procedure, process, system, method of operation, concept, principle, or discovery, regardless of the form in which it is described, explained, illustrated, or embodied in such work.”

Which means you have extra incentive to get started on your story so you'll be the first one out there with it :D

[Verdekurama]

Thanks guys, I know of the movie your talking about Ashton_Anchors, it was called, pizza of my heart. The two families in my story are actually single parent housholds.

[spasticmouse]

Oh, well... the idea is weak right now. We need more details!

After you up the details or maybe a nice prologue or preview chapter it would score much higher! Though I am a big fan of mangas that take a new look at the industry itself. Plus I am a huge fan of crazy conecpts which is why I love Yakitate Japan!! so much!

Hope this helps!

Please check out my website http://www.spasticmouse.com it has two great stories! The Rose and The Other Side of Orange.

Thanks!

SpasticMouse

[DarkNetting]

Sounds kinda like a Romeo and Juliet modern day thing, but with pets, and not nobility. But it sounds good...I just hope that it doesn't have the same ending.

[TonightMidnight]

Yeah...the plot is definately Romeo and Juliet, but that's not neccesarily a BAD thing. It's ok to use a common plot for an anime/manga as long as you're clever about it, and add your own fresh, twist to it. Think about it: the magical girl plot and the giant robot plot have been used a lot, but there are more anime/manga series about stuff like that coming out every day. And some of them are actually refreshing and good.

Whatever you do, just make it your own. :)

[Verdekurama]

The story takes place in San francisco. Its about a girl named Elizabeth and A boy named Dameon. They meet on the day when Elizabeth's father opens his grooming shop. Damoeons Family is a highly respected and rich family. Dameon gets a job at his fathers shop as a groomer. when they met a few times, they begin to notice that, they both live in a single parent household, they become friends. There father find out and try to break them up.

Tell me what you guys think. Critisim welcome.