My Manga: NEO ARK

[GlennSueznin1]

My name is Christopher Taylor and right now up on Deviantart I have my prolouge, chapter 1 and starting to put up chapter 2 of my manga entitled "NEO|ARK". I would love it if people would read it and tell me what they thought. Thank you

here is the link:
www.glennsueznin.deviantart.com/gallery

[Vicious1]

I didn't relly read it but the art work was of good or ok quality.

[GlennSueznin1]

I didn't relly read it but the art work was of good or ok quality.

Thanks, but unless you read it I won't knw if the story is good or not? A book's worth is only there if read, you know?

[KaYoKitten]

Note: It would be really helpful to provide links from pic to pic. You can do this by copy-pasting the link to the next deviation in the comments box. Go to the Edit portion of your page to get it done. It doesn't take too long, but it's a really nice gesture when you're asking people to read a comic on dev art.

It'd also be nice NOT to put so much dialogue in. I can hardly read it, the type is so small and so I didn't even bother. Most of the time, you can wheedle an entire paragraph of dialogue down to only a sentence. Sometimes less is better than more, and this is definitely the case.

Also, do you have tone or tone programs? I would like to see some tone on your pages, they would really pop off the page if you did. ^_^

[GlennSueznin1]

Note: It would be really helpful to provide links from pic to pic. You can do this by copy-pasting the link to the next deviation in the comments box. Go to the Edit portion of your page to get it done. It doesn't take too long, but it's a really nice gesture when you're asking people to read a comic on dev art.

It'd also be nice NOT to put so much dialogue in. I can hardly read it, the type is so small and so I didn't even bother. Most of the time, you can wheedle an entire paragraph of dialogue down to only a sentence. Sometimes less is better than more, and this is definitely the case.

Also, do you have tone or tone programs? I would like to see some tone on your pages, they would really pop off the page if you did. ^_^


In those pages, the diologue is needed. So theres no real way I can just throw that away. I'm gonna take that as you didnt like my story since you didnt bother to read. Well..thanks anyways. And I do have a tone program, however I didn't get it until I started workin on the second chapter. So when I finish with this chapter, I'll go back and do toning for that.