Erisu-Chan
03-29-2006, 12:08 AM
I've been working on my manga called 'Wolf Emerald' and was wondering what you though of the story.
{Story}
It was said that 500 years ago the 3 worlds joined where the dead walked with the living and Ookami-humans with the abilities of wolves- and humans were in the one world, but why? The Wolf Emerald is why. She appeared human, so beautiful the great warriors who came to slay her were lost in her eyes and then before they could think twice she had ended their lives. Moushigo Shinko an Ookami trained with 33 Guardians of the 3 worlds taking their crystals of power and forging them into an almighty blade. No one could defeat the Wolf Emerald who controlled hell itself was slain by this great sword. As she left the world her last words were “I may leave the world now but by leaving my heart behind I promise I will return to destroy the 3 worlds and rule again…”
500 years after the Wolf Emerald’s death Kahen Shinko literately falls from a large fox shaped stone from her family Shrine in Japan (World of Man) and ends up in the Wolf Kingdom (Wolf of Fantasy) and stops the attempted murder Sanákudou tried to pull against the Grey-Wolf demon Prince Ashura whom she was meant to marry. As Sanákudou tries to rid of Kahen who stumbled upon the Petal Emerald; heart of the Wolf Emerald, she holds her left hand up and blow a powerful attack [like the notorious attack of the Wolf Emerald] Sanákudou flees back to Tasekai –her lover, who says to himself “everything was going as planed” referring to Kahen. Kahen accidentally releases the power of the 33 Wolf Guardians that made the Emerald Sword while pulling the famous sword out of Ashura who’d been stabbed with it.
Now Ashura and Kahen have no choice to join up,not only to complete their own goals but rebuild the Emerald Sword after being warned by the two
strongest Wolf Guardians, Gyoukou and Tokoyami –Guardian’s of Light and
Darkness, that their master the Wolf Emerald will return from death and rule
again and destroy the worlds that they though finally had peace, after that war 500 years ago…
-What do you think? i can give a small summery of my story if you like! :D
-Erisu-Chan
{Story}
It was said that 500 years ago the 3 worlds joined where the dead walked with the living and Ookami-humans with the abilities of wolves- and humans were in the one world, but why? The Wolf Emerald is why. She appeared human, so beautiful the great warriors who came to slay her were lost in her eyes and then before they could think twice she had ended their lives. Moushigo Shinko an Ookami trained with 33 Guardians of the 3 worlds taking their crystals of power and forging them into an almighty blade. No one could defeat the Wolf Emerald who controlled hell itself was slain by this great sword. As she left the world her last words were “I may leave the world now but by leaving my heart behind I promise I will return to destroy the 3 worlds and rule again…”
500 years after the Wolf Emerald’s death Kahen Shinko literately falls from a large fox shaped stone from her family Shrine in Japan (World of Man) and ends up in the Wolf Kingdom (Wolf of Fantasy) and stops the attempted murder Sanákudou tried to pull against the Grey-Wolf demon Prince Ashura whom she was meant to marry. As Sanákudou tries to rid of Kahen who stumbled upon the Petal Emerald; heart of the Wolf Emerald, she holds her left hand up and blow a powerful attack [like the notorious attack of the Wolf Emerald] Sanákudou flees back to Tasekai –her lover, who says to himself “everything was going as planed” referring to Kahen. Kahen accidentally releases the power of the 33 Wolf Guardians that made the Emerald Sword while pulling the famous sword out of Ashura who’d been stabbed with it.
Now Ashura and Kahen have no choice to join up,not only to complete their own goals but rebuild the Emerald Sword after being warned by the two
strongest Wolf Guardians, Gyoukou and Tokoyami –Guardian’s of Light and
Darkness, that their master the Wolf Emerald will return from death and rule
again and destroy the worlds that they though finally had peace, after that war 500 years ago…
-What do you think? i can give a small summery of my story if you like! :D
-Erisu-Chan